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the rather non-sensical lighting takes a lot away from this. where exactly is the sun, and why aren't the background and foreground evenly lit? composition-wise, i would've put the girl in the middle and have the soldier take up the right edge of the shot, and also have him look at the hanging body. right now there's an absolutely massive disconnect between pretty much all elements of the shot.
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