• What Are You Waiting For Private? Get Out There!
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  • [video=youtube;OpTZeSek_1w]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=OpTZeSek_1w&feature=plcp[/video] [IMG]http://dl.dropbox.com/u/27247686/Through Ruin.jpg[/IMG] I've had this one for a while and I looked at it a bunch of times since I made it like a month or two ago. I just now noticed the horrific hand clipping on the left. [B]Chesty's Ultra Legit Edit[/B] [IMG]http://filesmelt.com/dl/gasmaskww2thing.jpg[/IMG]
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  • Why is his clothing different from the other soldiers? And why are they wearing gasmasks, what's so toxic about the air
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  • [QUOTE=minilandstan;35987433]Why is his clothing different from the other soldiers? And why are they wearing gasmasks, what's so toxic about the air[/QUOTE] 1: I was too lazy to pose FPS arms so I took a DoD v_model. He's also not being hit by that sickly green lamp so he looks even bluer. Dabadeedabadye. 2: I just thought they looked coo'.
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  • Anywho, it looks nice. But the cliff in the background is flat, so i'd maybe choose a better map in the future.
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  • Nice work, although i think they guy on the far-right is a bit too calm since people are actually shooting in that direction.
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  • Overall nice. But that sharpen is really really nasty in some places.
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  • [QUOTE=wraithcat;35997054]Overall nice. But that sharpen is really really nasty in some places.[/QUOTE] On the trees and around some of the buildings, right?
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  • I really like the foreground, but the background is lackluster. it's flat and uninteresting
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  • great posing and composition. decided to have a crack at editing it: [t]http://filesmelt.com/dl/gasmaskww2thing.jpg[/t] [editline]18th May 2012[/editline] snow is a bit shitty
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  • Very nice visual composition, would of really benefitted from some motion blur on the troops though, and make it look more hectic and intense. Also the opposition look pretty static; why aren't they returning fire? At least have some puffs of smoke and debris flying from gunshots. The sharpness on that tree and the perfectly straight cliff are a real eye sore, but not really in-your-face distracting at least. [QUOTE=minilandstan;35987433]Why is his clothing different from the other soldiers? And why are they wearing gasmasks, what's so toxic about the air[/QUOTE] You're judging the clothing of a blurred and out of focus, first person view of someone's [I]arms?[/I] And what does it even matter that they're wearing gas masks? It's a pretty insignificant detail to be pointing out. Gas masks give a very dehumanized, bad-ass, intimidating, and war ready look (same with balaclavas), which is appropriate for the situation stylistically regardless of whether the air is toxic or not. It also reminisces back to the barbaric, high casualty, chemical laden war zones of the first world war.